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People shouldn’t Share
Their Problem in Social Network
Thesis : Sharing problems in social network
really annoys to other people and embarrass themselves who do it.
Argument 1 : Firstly, people who share their problems in social network
really annoys to other people. In Facebook and Twitter, there are many unstable
teenagers who post their problems here. Here is an example…
“I’m so sad. Nobody cares with me. My
parents never think about me. They just think about money, money and money.”
Social network is not about to share
the problem like this. As the user of social network, I feel like they are
disturbing my vision with their status. I wanna see news from people updates,
but when they use it for sharing their problem, it is annoying.
Argument 2 : Not only annoys to other
people, sharing problems in social network embarrass themselves. With posting
like what I said before, people think that the person who posted it has a
terrible life. And it shows us that the person isn’t polite enough. It just
makes us think that the person is bad. And it embarrasses her/himself.
Recommendation : Finally, I strongly
agree that people shouldn’t share their problem in social network. It is better
for them to write their feeling in a book which called diary or they just have
to share it with their friends. Because if share their problems in social
network, every people who is online will know the bad side of them.
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